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Who is the main character of "Aladdin"?
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[quote="Iago"]those are good but like jas i think jasmines left arm is a little screwed up and also als face in the WNW scene looks a little deformed[/quote]
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<table border="0" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1" width="100%" class="forumline"> <tr> <th class="thCornerL" width="22%" height="26">Author</th> <th class="thCornerR">Message</th> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>AladdinsGenie</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Sun Jun 05, 2005 2:11 am<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">As someone who is an art major and has to go through CLASS critiques of my own work, I can't "critique" yours because I just don't care much for dissections of someone else's intentions and work based on one opinion. Your style is your style. <br /> <br />However, knowing the Aladdin style and how the characters look normally, I will say that it's not all that bad for something you did by hand. <img src="images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif" alt="Very Happy" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Meesh</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 10:28 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody"></span> <table width="90%" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="3" border="0" align="center"> <tr> <td><span class="genmed"><b>Jas wrote:</b></span></td> </tr> <tr> <td class="quote">1st Picture (just Al): I can't find anything meaningful to say about it. It's pretty good.</td> </tr> </table> <span class="postbody"> <br />I second that. <br /> <br /></span> <table width="90%" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="3" border="0" align="center"> <tr> <td><span class="genmed"><b>Jas wrote:</b></span></td> </tr> <tr> <td class="quote">2nd Picture (Al, Jas, Carpet): <br />Carpet, Text, and the Lamp - *thumbs up*</td> </tr> </table> <span class="postbody"> <br />I second that too. <br /> <br /></span> <table width="90%" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="3" border="0" align="center"> <tr> <td><span class="genmed"><b>Jas wrote:</b></span></td> </tr> <tr> <td class="quote">Jasmine - her hair seems a *little* long (but that may just be me) and her left arm is funky.</td> </tr> </table> <span class="postbody"> <br />I noticed that as well, but only as a critic. It is hardly noticeable. And her left arm looks like toothpaste being squeezed out of a tube... <br /> <br /></span> <table width="90%" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="3" border="0" align="center"> <tr> <td><span class="genmed"><b>Jas wrote:</b></span></td> </tr> <tr> <td class="quote">Aladdin - something about his face that I can't put my finger on and he's a little "developed" in the chest <img src="images/smiles/icon_lol.gif" alt="Laughing" border="0" /> </td> </tr> </table> <span class="postbody"> <br />His mouth is a bit deformed, and she is referring to Al's collarbones; the downward point is a bit too long. (it looks a bit awkward if ya no what i mean lol <img src="images/smiles/icon_surprised.gif" alt="Surprised" border="0" /> ) <br /> <br /></span> <table width="90%" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="3" border="0" align="center"> <tr> <td><span class="genmed"><b>Jas wrote:</b></span></td> </tr> <tr> <td class="quote">Overall they're good, and those are just some of my thoughts on them. <img src="images/smiles/icon_smile.gif" alt="Smile" border="0" /></td> </tr> </table> <span class="postbody"> <br /> <br />Same! I love the gradation! Better than me fosho! Keep it up!</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Calluna</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 9:45 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">I just mean that his face is a lot more angular than it is in the first movie, if that makes sense... <img src="images/smiles/icon_confused.gif" alt="Confused" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Guest</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 9:01 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">should i take that as a compliment or a diss? ROJ's animation sucked really bad. i know-the AWNW was from 3 years ago, when i was 12. i don't know why that arm looks so weird. the one that's going down or the one that's holding al's hand? the one holding the hand is messed up, and so is the one going down, though. and that "womanly part" on aladdin that jas spoke of was the fixed the collar bone. i recently fixed the sketchiness and added a touch of shading, but i didn't want to change anything majorly, b/c it'd change how i was drawing back then. i had to add the shading and darken the lines b/c my camera wouldn't pick up the pic very well. thanks for the compliments and criticism! more piics to come later on. working on a pic of iago. he's silent and calm for once. i call it "sedated iago " or "tranquilized iago" <img src="images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif" alt="Very Happy" border="0" /> later, homies!</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Calluna</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 7:59 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">The Jafar one looks kind of like the style they drew him in in RoJ or the Hercules TV series... <img src="images/smiles/icon_smile.gif" alt="Smile" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Iago</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 7:42 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">those are good but like jas i think jasmines left arm is a little screwed up and also als face in the WNW scene looks a little deformed</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Jas</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 6:38 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">1st Picture (just Al): I can't find anything meaningful to say about it. It's pretty good. <br /> <br />2nd Picture (Al, Jas, Carpet): <br />Carpet, Text, and the Lamp - *thumbs up* <br />Jasmine - her hair seems a *little* long (but that may just be me) and her left arm is funky. <br />Aladdin - something about his face that I can't put my finger on and he's a little "developed" in the chest <img src="images/smiles/icon_lol.gif" alt="Laughing" border="0" /> <br /> <br />Overall they're good, and those are just some of my thoughts on them. <img src="images/smiles/icon_smile.gif" alt="Smile" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>IRideAladdin'sCarpet</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Sat Jun 04, 2005 6:17 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">i have another pic for critiquing. it's a portrait of Aladdin i drew 3 days ago. I am in fact awware of the fact that the eyes need to be bigger and reshaped and the nose isn't big enough. <br />The 2nd pic is my AWNW pic. Any ways, i drew all of these by hand, and i've never had any lessons, so i'm open to critiquing. thanks! <br /><a href="http://www.imageshack.us" target="_blank" class="postlink"><img src="http://img94.echo.cx/img94/5462/dcp19221uk.jpg" border="0" /></a> <br /><a href="http://www.imageshack.us" target="_blank" class="postlink"><img src="http://img98.echo.cx/img98/2005/dcp19248qt.jpg" border="0" /></a></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Iago</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 8:59 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">thats pretty good my only suggestion would be like everyone else said would be taller and thinner and also on a side note i know hands are hard and andreas made jafars hands all the harder but the only thing i would have to say would be that the hands need to be bonier\. jafar is a thing guy with practically no meat on him to give him the creepy old guy feel to him along with the evil sinister guy so it all has to come together i've tried a bazillion times and so far i've succeeded only drawing the head but other than that looks great <img src="images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif" alt="Very Happy" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>IRideAladdin'sCarpet</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 5:46 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">yeah- i'm completely worthless at drawing hands. it'd help if i could get some art lessons!!! which i've never had AND NEED!!!! of course it's worthless for me to say this, b/c my 'rents won't be looking at this. oh well. sigh. i have a gajilion others. i'm sure i could scan them in sometime. most are from 2 years ago, b/4 i learned a lot of what i know now. they could be a LOT better. one of my favorites is of al and jas on the carpet. btw, none of my aladdin pics are colored, they're all B&W. Don't want to ruin the with color, b/c i have the shading as B&W, and it'd look weird w/ color. unless i drew all the outlines and colored and shadowed with color. wow. blonde moment. lol! well, i also have one of aladdin, 3 of jasmine, one of the harem girls, genie, and jafar, which u've seen. well, thanks for the support. i'm gona start working on one of Iago being still and calm. I'll call it "Sedated Iago". LMAO! <img src="images/smiles/icon_lol.gif" alt="Laughing" border="0" /> TTYL, all! Thanks again! <br />Ram Jas</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Meesh</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue May 31, 2005 5:07 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Wow, that's better than I could do! <br /> <br />I would just make him thinner and much taller and work on the hands a bit. Keep it up! If you have any others, I would love to see them!</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>IRideAladdin'sCarpet</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 10:45 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">thank you soo much for all the super-nice comments! i was expecting a lot more harsh stuff. i've seen soo much better, and it's so great to see someone likes my work! thanks a bunch! i really appreciate it!</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Jas</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 10:10 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">It's really good. <img src="images/smiles/icon_smile.gif" alt="Smile" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>AladdinsGenie</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 10:05 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">That's really really good. It's a shame I suck at drawing <img src="images/smiles/icon_lol.gif" alt="Laughing" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Minerva</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Mon May 30, 2005 10:03 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">I really like this, this is really impressive for someone your age (I'm 17 and I don't have half the talent you do). My only suggestion would be to have Jafar taller and thinner.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> </table>
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