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Who is the main character of "Aladdin"?
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[quote="Magdaleina"][i]It depends on your motive as a critic and the constructive criticism that you implore out. [/i] To make writers think more about what they're doing and thereby improve. [i]Sometimes constructive criticism can be discouraging. That's why I so feel embarassed posting any of the pictures or stories here. I'm afraid that someone is going to run me out and make writing not so fun for me anymore.[/i] Concrit is always discouraging at first. If you're not thick-skinned enough to take it, then you shouldn't be posting your work [i]anywhere[/i] that is open forum. That's an important thing to learn about publishing in the real world; not everyone is going to like it and first drafts are [i]never[/i] going to be like the final product. [i]Does it have to be 100 % accurate based on history? Disney didn't really do their research on the historical events and timing in the original movie in Aladdin. That's why there's alot of confusion on what time period it actually is and when where what happened that goes in between. [/i] Aladdin is never set in a historical place because Disney didn't want to get razzed for messing with events in history. That's why they purposefully leave stuff like that out. [i]So, why does mine have to be based upon accuracy? [/i] Because there will always be that one critic who wants to see if you, as a passionate writer, will go the extra distance and do the research to make your story that much more vivid and in-depth. It makes you look better and makes them go "ooh" with the work you put in. [i]This story, "Come What May" was one of my first fics. Did you actually took the time to read my story ?[/i] Truthfully? No. I've been asking questions here, and your inability to take concrit and just [i]discuss[/i] plotting, even stuff you haven't even done, tells me that your work might not be the seasoned type I'm usually up to reading.[/quote]
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Mariposa79
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 6:41 pm
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Syera wrote:
Nope. I saw your posted snippet.
Well you can't critique something if you don't know the whole story. Right?
Come on. Read it. PLEEEASSEE!
Syera
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 6:34 pm
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Nope. I saw your posted snippet.
Mariposa79
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 6:33 pm
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Syera wrote:
Now they're too big. A width of 500 would've sufficed. Oh, well.
I say... he looks a tad crosseyed in that black-and-white picture. Heh... silly boy must have a real thing against artists and photographers, eh?
Only quibble I have is that the characters in your story seem a little out of character. Oh, well. Rajan's pretty nice-lookin', mm-hmm.
Oh yeah, he makes funny faces when the artists comes around to do with picture for the royal painting. That or a tiny little nat flew on his nose because the artist told him not to move.
Quibble? You've read my story ? or That's what you got so far that's posted here? I put incerpts from my story here. So I can get people to come to the Library to read my stuff. Little bits and pieces of it seem to be out of charcter but the whole story explains it.
Syera
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 6:15 pm
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Now they're too big. A width of 500 would've sufficed. Oh, well.
I say... he looks a tad crosseyed in that black-and-white picture. Heh... silly boy must have a real thing against artists and photographers, eh?
Only quibble I have is that the characters in your story seem a little out of character. Oh, well. Rajan's pretty nice-lookin', mm-hmm.
Mariposa79
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:53 pm
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Here's a better pic of Rajan too.
Thank you Adiba for everything! We'll talk more !
Mariposa79
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 5:50 pm
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Lol. oh okay. I'll make it bigger.
Syera
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 3:06 pm
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Argh. Any chance you could make those bigger? They're so TINY!
Mariposa79
Posted: Mon Nov 07, 2005 12:28 pm
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Genie magically zapped into some music from his DJ turn table. The partygoers was amused by the contraption that played out music. They came out to dance on the floor. Rajan asked permission if it was okay to dance with Jasmine. Aladdin allowed it. Rajan took her hand and danced with her. He was quite a good dancer. He twirled her around and swung her. Jasmine followed his every move. Rajan dipped her, Jasmine smiled as she was put back up. Rajan squirmed closer to Jasmine.
Rajan looked at Aladdin. Aladdin was steaming in jealousy. " Jasmine. I think your husband must be mad because there's steam coming out of his ears. Boy! Is his face is red."
Aladdin went up to Jasmine, " May I cut in Rajan?" Rajan gave Jasmine back to Aladdin. " Aren't you cozying up a little too close to Rajan?"
Jasmine was shocked to see a jealous side in Aladdin, " We were just dancing. My love. Nothing more."
" He's been by your side all night and didn't talk to anybody else but you. I think that he's trying to break us apart." Aladdin said it in such suspicion.
" What? Aladdin! What is wrong with you? Why are you being this way? Prince Rajan was nice to you and this is how your treat your guests ?" Jasmine snapped at him.
AladdinsGenie
Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 1:59 pm
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Sure
Mariposa79
Posted: Sun Nov 06, 2005 11:25 am
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Anybody want to see more pics from my Come What May fanfic?
persian85033
Posted: Fri Nov 04, 2005 2:40 pm
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Well, maybe he was ill. He must've come down with something.
Mariposa79
Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 8:54 pm
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persian85033 wrote:
I just thought because it was night, and then probably because he needed to go out into the sun a little more. He did look like he hadn't seen sunlight in ages.
But yet, Saluk goes ramsacking and looking for the Oracle in the Sun with Cassim
persian85033
Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 6:31 pm
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I just thought because it was night, and then probably because he needed to go out into the sun a little more. He did look like he hadn't seen sunlight in ages.
AladdinsGenie
Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 6:14 pm
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No
She is referring to his change in skin tone. She is saying they ran out of a flesh tone and just used gray
persian85033
Posted: Thu Nov 03, 2005 6:00 pm
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Saluk had blue eyes?
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