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Who is the main character of "Aladdin"?

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[quote="Mariposa79"][quote="Magdaleina"][i]It depends on your motive as a critic and the constructive criticism that you implore out. [/i]

To make writers think more about what they're doing and thereby improve.

[i]Sometimes constructive criticism can be discouraging. That's why I so feel embarassed posting any of the pictures or stories here. I'm afraid that someone is going to run me out and make writing not so fun for me anymore.[/i]

Concrit is always discouraging at first. If you're not thick-skinned enough to take it, then you shouldn't be posting your work [i]anywhere[/i] that is open forum. That's an important thing to learn about publishing in the real world; not everyone is going to like it and first drafts are [i]never[/i] going to be like the final product.

[i]Does it have to be 100 % accurate based on history? Disney didn't really do their research on the historical events and timing in the original movie in Aladdin. That's why there's alot of confusion on what time period it actually is and when where what happened that goes in between. [/i]

Aladdin is never set in a historical place because Disney didn't want to get razzed for messing with events in history. That's why they purposefully leave stuff like that out.

[i]So, why does mine have to be based upon accuracy? [/i]

Because there will always be that one critic who wants to see if you, as a passionate writer, will go the extra distance and do the research to make your story that much more vivid and in-depth. It makes you look better and makes them go "ooh" with the work you put in.

[i]This story, "Come What May" was one of my first fics. Did you actually took the time to read my story ?[/i]

Truthfully? No. I've been asking questions here, and your inability to take concrit and just [i]discuss[/i] plotting, even stuff you haven't even done,  tells me that your work might not be the seasoned type I'm usually up to reading.[/quote]

Thank you. Please take the time to read them . I really do need the improvement to write. You're right, I need to be thick skinned on publishing things out. Fear gets the best out of everybody. Here in the Library of Agrabah, i'm testing my waters. You got me thinking on where should I look at and to be careful. what do you mean by seasonal ? I do take constructive criticism. It's just you're asking me to change a city that ties with one of the events in the story. If i change it then I have to change everything else. I don't know what seasonal stuff are you talking about. i write here in the Library of Agrabah and only here. Writing things about Aladdin is what I love to do. Writing is what I want to learn and develop on. So thank you for pointing things out for me. I take it into consideration and research more.For your part, i think you should look at the whole picture before you can add your critique. You can't go say something without seeing the whole picture. It's like taking a gum wrapper and assuming it belongs to a chocolate bar.

that was my mistake for putting Rajan ancestry and saying that his city is on a rich port side that was from Egypt. That put the whole debate in the first place.Honestly my story, which you haven't read . never said, where the city is located or where rajan came from.[/quote]

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