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[quote="Syera"]The poem doesn't really reel me in. If anything, it has me vastly worried that this fanfiction's sole purpose is to show off four peoples' OMGShinyFemaleOCs.[/quote]
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<table border="0" cellpadding="3" cellspacing="1" width="100%" class="forumline"> <tr> <th class="thCornerL" width="22%" height="26">Author</th> <th class="thCornerR">Message</th> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>shadows_light91</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 6:15 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Well, thanks for the feedback anyway.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Oasis</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 2:51 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">I understand you guys have worked hard on this fanfiction. <br />But I have to agree with Syera. The poem was well written, however it doesn't catch my attention beyond that. It rhymes and thats pretty and all but... I don't want to continue reading after that. ^^;</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Syera</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 1:47 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">You're missing the point. The fact remains that if I were looking for a fanfiction to read for the lulz one day, that one would have completely failed to actually get my attention.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>AladdinFan92</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:33 am<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Sorry, the above post is from me. I forgot to log in. <img src="images/smiles/icon_smile.gif" alt="Smile" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Guest</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:30 am<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody"></span> <table width="90%" cellspacing="1" cellpadding="3" border="0" align="center"> <tr> <td><span class="genmed"><b>Syera wrote:</b></span></td> </tr> <tr> <td class="quote">All I'm saying is that instead of reeling me in, the prophesy just left me reeling. <img src="images/smiles/icon_razz.gif" alt="Razz" border="0" /> <br /> <br />It does not entice me to read the story at all.</td> </tr> </table> <span class="postbody"> <br /> <br />Well, I agree with dazzeling diamond and persian85033 (sorry if I got the numbers wrong, lol) Don't judge the story before reading it, Syera. I already know that dazzeling diamond is a great writer, as I've been an avid reader of her fanfiction for more than a year. From what I know of you, you're almost always a little judgemental about Aladdin fanfiction. Give this one a chance before you flame it. <img src="images/smiles/icon_cool.gif" alt="Cool" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Syera</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 2:57 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">All I'm saying is that instead of reeling me in, the prophesy just left me reeling. <img src="images/smiles/icon_razz.gif" alt="Razz" border="0" /> <br /> <br />It does not entice me to read the story at all.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Guest</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:56 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Well said.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>persian85033</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:31 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Well, it wouldn't be fair to judge before reading. I mean, you might even like it.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>dazzeling diamond</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 7:55 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Sorry, forgot to log in for previous post, again.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Guest</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 6:29 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Whoops, yes I did mean the prophecy...not the banner (Which I actually did make, <img src="images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif" alt="Very Happy" border="0" />) <br /> <br />Yeah, I feel really priviliged to work with three fantastic authors, and this story has really become special to us. As far as Mary-Sue's go, many people have different opinions on what classifies a character as Mary- Sue. If we wanna go really far, the whole Aladdin original cast, could be classified as cliched (Very rags-to-riches-, guy-gets-girl, ugly villain, kinda stuff). <br /> <br />As shadows said, reading and reviewing, giving as much advice/constructive critique as possible, would be great <img src="images/smiles/icon_smile.gif" alt="Smile" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>shadows_light91</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 5:35 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: Re: An Epic Fanfiction...</span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">[quote="dazzeling diamond"] <br />Whatcha think? I didn't write the banner by the way, that was written by shadows-light91.[/quote] <br /> <br />She meant the prophecy, but it's fine. <img src="images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif" alt="Very Happy" border="0" /> <br /> <br />Anyway, we've really worked hard on the story and planning it. It's almost been two years since we've started planning, and it's not just some story about four Mary-Sues. It's going to be great, at least I think so. I know I'm working with three great authors, and I want, if nothing else, to let their wonderful work be shown through this. Just give it a try guys. <br /> <br />And hey, if it doesn't spark your interest when you read the first chapter, at least review and tell us so. Feedback helps!</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>dazzeling diamond</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 4:49 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Whoop, that was my post before. I forgot to log in.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Guest</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 4:47 pm<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Thank you for your opinion. This is an Aladdin fanfiction, and we each control one character. I know some people are against the entrance of OC's, but personally, I feel that it's not fair to judge them until one has at least read about their characters and development.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row2"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>Syera</b></span></td> <td class="row2" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 7:40 am<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: </span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">The poem doesn't really reel me in. If anything, it has me vastly worried that this fanfiction's sole purpose is to show off four peoples' OMGShinyFemaleOCs.</span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> <tr> <td width="22%" align="left" valign="top" class="row1"><span class="name"><a name=""></a><b>dazzeling diamond</b></span></td> <td class="row1" height="28" valign="top"><table width="100%" border="0" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"> <tr> <td width="100%"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/icon_minipost.gif" width="12" height="9" alt="Post" title="Post" border="0" /><span class="postdetails">Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 1:20 am<span class="gen"> </span> Post subject: An Epic Fanfiction...</span></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><hr /></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2"><span class="postbody">Hey there! <br /> <br />Tis dazzeling diamond here (Duh), and I thought, since this is the fanworks seciton, I might take the opportunity to talk up a fanfiction I'm working on with three other authors (Shadows-ligth91, persian85033 and rubyinnle, all situated at fanfiction.net, there work is SO worth checking out) <br /> <br />ANYWHOOOO....AGES ago, we came up with a story that wuld be, well, a monumental effrot on our parts, I mean, a 4-way colloaboration is pretty hard, seriously! I guess, if I'm being honest, I felt a little let down at the low response (I admit that I wasn't being realistic, since the Aladdin fandom isn't as huge as say, HP). <br /> <br />In any case, this might sound desperate....but it has to be said. We put our story up on ff.net, and only received 3 reviews (1 doesn't count because it was spam), and I so felt we deserved more for our efforts....so my determination brought me here <img src="images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif" alt="Very Happy" border="0" /> <br /> <br />I'm just going to post the prophecy in the first chap of our story, and if that reels you in....then PLEASE check out the rest of the story <img src="images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif" alt="Very Happy" border="0" /> <br /> <br />"Apart in death, together in life, <br />A new pair plots someone else’s strife. <br />These two enemies so well-known <br />On the horizon will soon be shown. <br /> <br />From this death to life there comes a fear, <br />For two combined brings an end so near. <br />No help can seem to conquer all, <br />As one by one the heroes will fall. <br /> <br />But from the ends of the earth, help arrives, <br />If you search, the magic survives. <br />Wind and water and earth and fire: <br />These elementals will soon transpire. <br /> <br />The wind of the sky is already near, <br />News of engagement will make her appear, <br />She will help find the other three. <br /> <br />Water, for you, is the next to find, <br />A mermaid exiled ‘til she changes her mind. <br />She will be waiting there by the sea. <br /> <br />Earth will be here, close to the ground <br />Among the nobility is where she is found <br />Spanish by blood and religiously true <br /> <br />Lastly with fire the mission now starts, <br />A girl with eyes that can see into hearts, <br />In Vinitha, your search will be through." <br /> <br />Whatcha think? I didn't write the banner by the way, that was written by shadows-light91. <br /> <br />Oh, btw, the pic in my signature is the banner for the story...hope that spreads the word a lil <img src="images/smiles/icon_biggrin.gif" alt="Very Happy" border="0" /></span></td> </tr> </table></td> </tr> <tr> <td colspan="2" height="1" class="spaceRow"><img src="templates/subBlack/images/spacer.gif" alt="" width="1" height="1" /></td> </tr> </table>
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