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Secrets of the Magic Carpet...advice?

 
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persian85033
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 3:11 pm    Post subject: Secrets of the Magic Carpet...advice? Reply with quote

I was wondering how the story would be better. Just writing it the way ti is, like that, following the events of the movie, or mabye doing a shorter story, like, where Carpet would be sort of...meditating, or something. Like, maybe, "that's Al's dad, he's the one who STILL hasn't really taken a liking to me..."when he goes near Cassim. Sort of says what he thinks about each character, recalling good/bad moments, etc. http://aladdincentral.org/library/viewstory.php?sid=686&PHPSESSID=dbd577c4e42362ce97f4c53a8b35b313
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 3:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

...wait what? Laughing

Are we talking about the book The Magic Carpet's Secret or something else?
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 3:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I was talking about the fanfic that I'm writing. I left the link to it right at at the end of the message.
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 3:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ah, gotcha Laughing
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