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persian85033 Elemental
Joined: 27 May 2005 Posts: 2061 Location: Agrabah(I wish)
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 3:11 pm Post subject: Secrets of the Magic Carpet...advice? |
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I was wondering how the story would be better. Just writing it the way ti is, like that, following the events of the movie, or mabye doing a shorter story, like, where Carpet would be sort of...meditating, or something. Like, maybe, "that's Al's dad, he's the one who STILL hasn't really taken a liking to me..."when he goes near Cassim. Sort of says what he thinks about each character, recalling good/bad moments, etc. http://aladdincentral.org/library/viewstory.php?sid=686&PHPSESSID=dbd577c4e42362ce97f4c53a8b35b313 _________________ "I too am a member of your species, Captain, or I was. Perhaps I am not anymore. Perhaps you are right in thinking of me as an alien. I know I am different from you. You see-I do not kill." |
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AladdinsGenie Genie of the Messageboard
Joined: 17 Jul 2004 Posts: 11856 Location: Tennessee
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 3:17 pm Post subject: |
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...wait what?
Are we talking about the book The Magic Carpet's Secret or something else? |
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persian85033 Elemental
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 3:23 pm Post subject: |
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I was talking about the fanfic that I'm writing. I left the link to it right at at the end of the message. _________________ "I too am a member of your species, Captain, or I was. Perhaps I am not anymore. Perhaps you are right in thinking of me as an alien. I know I am different from you. You see-I do not kill." |
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AladdinsGenie Genie of the Messageboard
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Posted: Mon Sep 12, 2005 3:47 pm Post subject: |
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Ah, gotcha |
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